Feedback on one page pitch

Recently our media teacher gave me and my group some feedback based on our 1 minute music video of Stronger by Kanye West which we created at the start of the school year. Our teacher suggested that in future we use a less known song, this would help avoid any copyright issues. The song we have chosen for our next music video is Day N' Night by Kid Cudi, although this may be a well known song we have decided to use the original version of the song which is not as well known as the famous remix. Further advice was given to us regarding the range of shots which need to be added as well as some reflection of theorists such as Goodwin's theory of the link between visuals and lyrics. Therefore in our next music video we will be adding this so keep an eye out! This feedback from our teacher will allow us to improve and be better at the production of our music videos, allowing us to improve on our overall media production.